- Different form of writing -Elaborated but can used more - Variety of compositional risks -Mechanical/grammatical errors
Chuck Bass
-Different form of writing -Compositional Risks -Specific but can use more details -Mechanical/grammatical errors
Reflection
Blair and Chuck responded well to instruction. Through looking at their writing closer, I noticed that the students are starting to further explore their writing abilities and challenge themselves. Students are now embedding specific details to their pieces that allow the reader to experience what the writer experienced. Looking back, a few instructional strategies I would have liked to use that would have been helpful to my students are modeling with my own writing before having them go forth with the task on their own. Modeling helps us teacher get the student results we are looking for. In the future, I am looking to opening up to my students and allowing them to see my own writing so that they can use it as a model for their own.